Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Should I title this, 'Unfinished' or would you care to suggest another?

Chaotic, powerful, ambiguous, this brings the reader in, not on the first reading but subsequent ones. Compliments to you. The image of molestation as evidenced by the boxers and bedlace is poetry well said as in so few words you said it. A strong poem, you will know the title when you reflect more.

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